He saw her
She saw him
Two worlds collided
Is it for a creation
Is it for a demolition
Is it for losing
Is it for gaining
Neither was sane enough
To think of any consequences
Time moved on
There was a new planet
With its own moons
And a little Sun for themselves
They revolved
Not one around another
But each around the other
There was a sudden pause
In the entire galaxy
For the beauty of this planet
Was breathtaking
Even to the Mother of Nature!!
He saw her
She saw him
Nothing changed that one thing!!
Superbly written with a smooth flow
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Thank you!! 🙂 🙂 🙂
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Do u know how the spheres rotating around each other look like !
It is mesmerising like dancers in Salsa 😛
Wonderful mix of words and emotions 🙂
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Yes.. it is very beautiful right?!
Thank you for that wonderful comparison.. It’s very apt indeed…
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It’s very beautiful.
I am cosmic lover, it means a lot to me 😉
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Oh.. Great.. That’s something beyond words and so beautiful to fall in love with.. 🙂
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I enjoyed this picture you painted for me ! ; ) { whisper ” when the words collided were the moons syllables” ? ]
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Oops…. They are worlds.. Not words.. Thanks bro! I just noticed the typo.. Edited it..
While the world collided, a great pasture of green garden landed on the moon.. 😛 and maybe when words collide, moon is just a typo or .. 😉 😛
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Or any thing the mind can imagine! Yes indeed, a veritable can of worms ! Be careful with these “words” ! ; )
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I will, Will.. 😉 😀
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okay,okay! ; )
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I love the energy in this poem Aadhira! 🙂 You are one amazing writer young girl 🙂
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Thank you so much Jen!!! It never fails to brighten my day and bring a sweet smile to me, when you comment.. 🙂 😀
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Aaww thank you Aadhira, I feel the same when I see your name and notifications 😀 😀 Keep writing and I’ll keep reading and commenting! 🙂
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😀 😀
I am not even committing anymore that I will read your posts soon.. But I will make time eventually to spam you with notifications.. 😉 Just wait and I will make it worth the wait.. ( I always dream big.. You remember that right?! 😛 )
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😀 Hahaha yes and I love your big dreams Aadhira! 😉 I’m so looking forward to being spammed by you with a flood of notifications, you can read my stuff when you have time. I’m probably putting another one out tonight or tomorrow 😛 Not to worry, I also read what I can when I can. 🙂
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Thanks for the understanding.. My blog is being fuelled only with kind people like you.. 🙂
May not be soon.. But when I visit, surely I am spamming.. 😉 😛
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Aaww you are always a sweetheart 💖 Can’t wait for your visit and awesome spam 😂😂
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😀 😀 😀
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Good 🙂
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Thank you!! 🙂
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